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Rachel trained at the Italia Conti Academy of Theatre Arts where she graduated in Professional Musical Theatre and recieved awards for best actress.She later went on to work with queen choreographer, Arlene Philips, as a principal dancer with the unique performances of The Give Back Project and played a principal role in a new writers play entitled The Perfect Man for Me. She went on to make her first short film with Ocean Storm productions entitled 'The Pledge'. After leaving Paris where she was promoted to dance captain in shows and parades she discovered her passion to teach and help benefit others in performing arts. She has since taught dance and drama all over the country with Jago performers in Worcester, Abbey School of Dance in Coventry and Lemon Jelly Arts in Leicester and London. Rachel now wishes to further her teaching skills to one day achieve her ambitions of becoming a successful member of a stage school faculty or perhaps even a principal. She is undertaking a Work Based Learning course to develop these skills and achieve the needed qualifications to conquer her dreams.

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Thursday 10 December 2009

TASK D- Writing style1 first draft.

SEVEN DEADLY SINS.

Produced and Directed by Rachel Lee Moore

The seven deadly sins combines the three talents of dance, drama and song together to create an unmissable performance. From envious ballads to indulgence in dance this show will entertain all ages developing a new sense of performance. It is an ever-changing motley assortment of some of the most outragous, exciting and down right bizarre and beautiful acts.



The evening is packed with a variety of show stopping routines.

Moore's show reveals just how deadly these Seven Deadly Sins can be!!!!

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2 comments:

  1. Rosea Pickering3 January 2010 at 09:39

    Hi Rachel,
    This is a good start, by looking at the lanuguage you have used I can immediately define this style as Marketing.

    I feel that this piece is a bit short though.
    There are a few things that you could look at to make it a bit longer:
    Tell us about the story you are trying to portray,who is the piece aimed at?
    Where is it being performed and when? Talk about the venue and why it is being held there, is it to do with the space, or the community or something else?

    Is the sentence "Moore's show reveals just how deadly these Seven Deadly Sins can be!!!!" a quote from someone? If so, say who.

    Tell us about the performers and why you chose these people, and also tell us about their characters.

    Well done, this is a good start!
    Rosie

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  2. Rachel Lee Moore3 January 2010 at 11:38

    Hi Rosea,

    Thanks for your comment. Yes this is the first draft of my marketing piece. I struggled with this piece the most and this is the piece which I thought would be the most straight forward to write. All you have written has been very benificial to me and I have taken on board that my piece lacks information. Please read the final Marketing draft so you can hopfully see my progression.

    Thank you again
    Rachel
    xxx

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